We have brainstormed and Lucie has come up with a really good idea. This is how we are picturing it so far:
-Our main protagonist wakes up on a roof (or any other location could work, but we have stuck with roof for now.)
-Also, we haven't found a name for our character so for purposes of discussion until we figure out a name, 'X' is our new main character. We also wanted an easygoing looking type of character, which we found inspiration from from Ryan Reynolds)
-X starts hearing beeping noises, coming from around him. He's lightly bruised, as if he had taken part in a sort of hassle or fight. He looks down and finds a fresh scar on his body, which is where he then concludes that that is where the beeping is coming from.
-There is a homeless man sitting on the roof with him, the homeless man himself is quite quirky and funny and brings a lighthearted tone to the story, instead if it being all suspense and mystery.
-From then on, the homeless embarks on a journey with the beeping man to figure out why he is beeping, and speculates that he has a bomb inside of him.
-We wanted to use graphic matches and parallelism techniques to appeal to the eye during this opening so we had come up with the idea that certain objects, people, or colors may become triggering to X which make him flashback to a certain point in time of the night before to figure out what happens and/or figure what task he must fulfill.
Hi Danny! Really liked the idea of your blog. Seems very well though, and love how you guys are open to new ideas and change it as it seems appropriate. And the pictures really capture the attention of the readers. I would suggest adding more. And especially adding more blogs, since the readers want to be updated on everything. So don't forget the blogs because that's how us the readers actually get the inside scoop. But besides that great vocabulary and command of the language. Keep writing and filming!
ReplyDeleteYou are very behind on these posts which is a downer because the posts I see are actually very good for the most part. You add a visual when describing your main character you’re descriptive on how you want your story to go, and it's just well written for the most part. Still, the issue remains you don’t have enough posts in. Just make more posts like this one and I’m sure your blog will turn out fine.
ReplyDeleteI won't mention that you're a bit behind on your posts, as I'm sure you've heard it enough, but I will agree with Chris that this project definitely has potential. I think your idea was well thought out despite your description being somewhat vague, but nevertheless, I like the direction in which your group is headed. You do a good job of tying in the thoughts and emotions of other group members into your blog posts, giving a more bona fide perspective for your readers. Your research seems to be there, but I'd definitely focus on tying it together with where your project is at in terms of progression, what you plan to do, how you plan to do it etc. You definitely need to get started on showing the process and progression of the project, in other words, get blogging. Keep brainstorming and start constructing your vision to hit the ground running. Wishing you the best of luck, mate.
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